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Re: You Gonna Eat That?
well there's no joke forum so you might as well post it here, right? i give this joke 7/10. yeah it was pretty easy to get, but i bet none ...
Jan 19, 2008 -
Re: butterflies with white red wings
Prologue: Before World War III… My head was swimming. I kept telling myself I definitely, definitely was not dreaming. But my head kept swimming. I looked at my sister and ...
Jan 18, 2008 -
Re: The soft places
The world did look small from the viewport. He bit into an apple and thought about where he was and what he was doing here. He couldn’t remember. There were ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Petals
this is awesome. like reading a painting, kind of?
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Gorgon
i really like this. i think the unconventional? structure, lack of punctuation, etc lend the poem a sort of honesty. there are no stanzas that i could single out as ...
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: From when...
Written after riding the train and just… (sigh) thinking over things and (sigh) how sad life (sigh) is… From when… It was written. It must be recorded without backspaces. The ...
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Not Hungry
Lunch could not have arrived sooner for Michael Smith, Christopher Jones, and Sarah Green as they gathered around their cafeteria table to discuss a matter of great urgency and importance. ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: dead at 19
This is a bunch of navel-gazing that goes nowhere fast. but that's what i wanted...
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: dead at 19
you never were much more than used rags and crooked half smiles on autumn days. you skipped all your classes, abandoned your friends, and slept away months in grief, your ...
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: last year at marienbad
i'm sitting here and i'm thinking really hard but i can't seem to remember anything that happened yesterday i must have slept for an hour i must have slept for ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Phone call
I know, my opinion is pretty much outweighted. But-- I just think it works better like this. Even if it is confusing, that's a good thing. For this? Of course ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: even oak angels molt
i must have read that last stanza like ten times. this one's a keeper.
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: Phone call
i don't think the emphasis on dialogue works much in any capacity. this reads like a script for a recent brand of horror movie that'll hopefully fade out in coming ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: The day in the life of a wife and mother.
Somehow that red-faced, squirmy, worm like creature that emerged from the blood and mucus inside my uterus is over any percent of perfect. this line is really cool. your voice ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: I Was A Teenage Bus-Rider
The fumes might be getting to me, but isn't that a hole in the sky? Love this.
Oct 15, 2007
